A* Notes on 'La Belle Dame Sans Merci'

Themes

  • Deception

  • Love

  • Death

  • Femme fatale

Context

  • Keats died from tuberculosis in 1821 and was very ill towards the end of his life -> haunting morbidity in the poem and repetitions of ‘pale'

  • Inversion of medieval courtly love ballads -> sinister corruption of courtly love, where the chivalric knight saves the lady

  • Title is a reference to mediaeval Romance by French poet Alain Chartier

  • In the 19th century, long hair was associated with sensuality and sexuality

  • The succubus as a pervading threat in the 18th century

  • Contrapuntal readings of lily -> symbol of hope and spring, but during Victorian era (although Keats predates this) lilies used for funerals as a symbol of death

Critical interpretations... to engage with, argue for, argue against

  • Keats 'struggled to reconcile his boyish conception of women as goddesses with the mature notion of their "realities’ (Jordan, L.)

  • 'Nature withdraws from the scene abandoning the knight to his plight, unable to comfort him, it reflects only his desolation’ (Sandy, M.)

  • ‘Keats criticises the narcissistic love of his male protagonists who tend to objectify and idealise women into mere idols of beauty and admiration for their own personal gain.’ (Schulkins, R.)

  • 'Keats presents ‘supernatural female predators in La Belle Dame Sans Merci and Lamia’ (Joshi, S. T.)

Structure, language, form... + analysis

  • Iambic tetrameter except from last line of quatrains -> adds an abruptness + breaks fluidity

  • Concentrated caesuras at opening -> slows pace and creates a dragging sensation that mirrors the knight’s tedious wait and crawl towards death

  • Pathetic fallacy with autumnal setting -> summer is coming to an end, which reflects the knight’s near demise

  • Archaic language -> evokes a grandeur that fits with the antiquated chivalry of the knight

  • Poem begins in present tense with a witness narrator encountering knight -> adds an intensity because of the proximity of the knight’s death

  • Shift in tense and voice in 4th quatrain -> knight retrospectively recounts his experience with the lady + first person narrator adds an intimacy

  • Metapoetic, ‘No birds sing’ -> disrupts the melody + stark silence because doesn’t follow iambic tetrameter pattern

  • Depiction of knight -> contrasts against stereotypical expectations of bravery + strength. Instead we find a dreary, melancholic knight.

  • Floral motifs in 3rd quatrain -> creates an image of beauty and vitality that jarringly juxtaposes against the knight’s actual withered state

  • Introduction to the lady with supernatural allusions and listing of her physical attributes -> gives us a sense of her otherworldly capabilities + suggests narrator is consumed/ fascinated by her physical appearance

  • Implicit peripeteia/ turning point -> shift and inversion in power dynamic, from knight assuming active verbs of ‘I set her’ to the lady taking agency and control, ‘She took me’ + ‘she lulled me’

  • ‘I made a garland for her head’ -> commodified like a doll for decorative purposes

  • ‘And there I shut her wild wild eyes’ -> repetition of wild foreshadows her duplicitous nature + verb ‘shut’ demonstrates knight is trying to control her with a saviour complex, assuming the traditional role of the chivalric knight in medieval courtly love

  • ‘She lulled me asleep’ with its soft assonance + gentle verb juxtaposes against the matter encountered in the dream with the ‘pale kings, princes, pale warriors, death pale’ -> plosives contrast against previous soft l consonance

  • In last quatrain beginning is repeated in cyclical structure -> sense of entrapment + that death is inevitable